Dude! I love it! I absolutely adore that spell. Your 10 hours really paid off Great attention to detail with the sword

That looks kickass meo. I freaking love it. @.@ AWESOME!!

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thanks^^

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~Meoneko,
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Thankies^^

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~Meoneko,
the truest fangirl

I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this! And that's a good thing. 10 hours paid off. :3

Great attention to dinging up the sword a bit. It looks like it's seen it's days in battle and has served it's master well, however it also looks pretty intimidating, and I'd not want to fuck with it. Even the book looks a little battered, and considering it's seen a few battles, that a plus. Nothing that has any use should look pristine.

A few suggestions for further works, even though this is pretty good--

The sword, despite being through plenty of battles, should still see more sheen. I see where you gave it a little bit of glare, but to make it a little more realistic, I'd make the shine off of it slightly brighter. That'd give it a much more metalic look, considering the aura that's coming off of her. Also, her right knee looks just a tad bit sharp, but much better than some of your earlier works. Just keep working at it, and you'll have it down!

Really, I don't have much critique to give on this one. You did a pretty smashing job all around, good coloring, good shine off of her clothes to specify where the spikes are, great coloring on her hair, great facial expression of determination, excellent aura tones coming off of her, enough to make a point but not overdo it, it's really very good! The only other thing I can say is try to smooth out your lines a little more, though these are pretty good, they still look a little jagged. (My CGs are about the same way though, so I know it can be pretty difficult. Just do your best and it will come out alright.) Also, if you add a little more to the outer tips of the wings, they'd look a little more realistic as well.

All in all, great job!

You're improving so much!

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No prob can't wait to see more of your art. XD

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Thankyou so much! I will get right to practice^^

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ﾞ（ﾟ､ ｡ ７
　l、ﾞ ~ヽ
　じしf_, )ノ This is Kitty. Copy Kitty to your signature to help her achieve the world domination.

~Meoneko,
the truest fangirl

Another thing that I wanted to praise you on, since you've had difficulty with it previously and I felt I should have mentioned it was the proportions. You did an excellent job! None of the limbs were too big or too small, and the head was the right size for the rest of the body. She also looked very realistic in the upper body and that's great. :3

I'm proud of you.

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make-funable: (n.)1. To jest at something considered of little worth. 2. A word of little worth used to describe something of little value to the audience. 3.Repo! The Genetic Opera. -~kilderok